It does! I like it a lot better, anyway.

[ He wished his world could take some lessons from this one and others. Finishing off the pastry and dashing away the crumbs on his face with the back of his hand, he glanced up again. His attention finally shifting back to the matter at hand, the house and the bunnies. ]

I don’t think I saw your house before. Do the bunnies got a special place to stay or do they get their own room?